Sunday, October 19, 2008

first meeting

reviewed, discussed and somewhat finalized stories and themes for each possible short film.
ketan was first to go.

KETAN
4:33 - 5:14 pm
  • "revelation after revelation"
    • subtle revelations
    • "washes by": "slow but progressive"
  • up: companionship/ collaboration (validation of existence, his life)
  • down: loneliness, alone, contemplative, introverted
  • 3 different scenes
    • erase, draw/write again -> erase again
    • talking to someone
    • sees pigeon (example of third possible "up")
  • "one heartbeat." like a steady pulse
  • "it's a struggle against time"
(note to self: divide time into 5 second intervals)
  • down: "he doesn't care"
  • up: "he sees everything for what it is"
the person "he" talks to is "someone he admires in a weird way"
  • last up:
    • andy: bag breaks
    • ketan: headphones get caught on something
    • a: disturbance of my flow
    • k: without headphones, i'm thrown off pace
    • a: i notice the ground
summary: "burst of frustration"

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ANDY

5:14 pm - 5:57 pm
  • "no point"; simple animation
  • want to animate song
  • photo, drags, fade into "nowhere"
  • sketches of strip reveal themselves to HIM
  • run and slow down
  • SHE emerges out of a puddle of blood, stabbing HIM in the heart
  • the pain transforms HIM
  • lost boy
random notes, questions and comments:
why is there a puddle of blood? why does he stop next to it?

is HE undermining physical pain in order to temporarily forget and hide from the emotional kind?

jon: "a museum of memories"

might include frame around the flashes of comic strip, which are actually memories of a past relationship.

the photo HE is looking at in the beginning should appear as one of the images in the memory flashes so that a clear, if not blatant, connection is shown between the scenes.

the setting is not a forest, but rather blank white space. however, this is still to be finalized.

instead of music, use minimal sounds. like in samurai jack, the wishing well, 3 archers episode.

"with great power comes great responsibility"

andy will start on concept art and storyboard.

summary: "moment of inspiration"

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